Three things about myself
Hi~my name is Seo Yeon Lee. I can introduce about myself by many different way, but I will introduce about myself with three things. Guess what? I'll tell you about it.
These three kinds of things are only introduced about me. Now, let me introduce about them!
I talked about Jasmine, Woo sung Park and the number 4. I think now you can know about three things about me. I'm happy to share about myself with more humorous and meaningful words.
If you wrote the essay wronger, it would be the better one. This essay is too short! You can write longer essay by describing more details of the words you chose. For example, you can describe Jasmine's look and her role in the film and compare it with you in detail. Except the length of the essay, other parts(grammars and structures) were good enough.
ReplyDeleteGood job. You have some grammatical mistakes but overall I think you did a great job at introducing yourself
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
Great job!! Now I can know about you!!!
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